My first drawings have returned from their UK trip, so thought I would take a fresh look on them and review the formative feedback again.

My main impression is one of superficial work, so I wholeheartedly agree with the comments from my tutor, “lack of experimentation, exploration and investigation into your ideas”.

Perhaps I am being harsh on myself, could a little patience be needed? – having just started out on a completely new adventure. I am glad I have done some further IP work over the summer – have uncovered a bit more substance and depth to continue working with in the next assignment.